Thursday, June 22, 2006

Alliteration for the Riverside Cluster...and more!



Hi kidlets - Mrs McCullagh just gave me a good idea. Since you are now alliterative linguists, why don't you put your powers to the task of writing sentences on the HamiltON theme? You could be funny, poetic, positive negative - whatever!

We will see what you come up with, review the entries in class and choose work to post on the Riverside Cluster LMS writing cave.

Go for it!

Master Yoody

p.s. why stop at alliteration - use the other partsof speech to express your cleverness. just make sure yo ustate what it is you are using. e.g. similes, metaphors, hyperbole, etc.

p.p.s. don't forget to find out what limericks are and try to write something to win Ms Marr's weekly chocolate challenge. if you don't like chocolate i know a teacher who two who do.

8 comments:

Donkeyla (Aly-Blobber) said...

Hamilton:
1.
Harry helped Hannah hire Happy handy-Men, so Hannah hired handfuls of helpful henrey's and Harry's from hamilton how Harry helped Hannah is the true helpful Hamiltonion handy way.

Do you like it?
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laffydaffy said...

That sounds cool! I'm doing it right now.

Bubbles!

p.s. are we allowed to use txt language on here??

Donkeyla (Aly-Blobber) said...

Thanks Laffydaffy, you are a kind person and can you tell me your one ? plz

Mr Woody said...

nice one donkeyla - watch your spelling though.
also, laffy, i just told you today in class you had to use correct grammar and spelling but capitals are okay to leave out.
cheers you lot - well done for getting stuck in and being innovative.
8>)

Sig said...

Capitals are very important if you want to become a writer Mr Woody, and I want to become a writer. Do you think I'd be good at it?

Donkeyla (Aly-Blobber) said...

Sog i think that you could if you try really hard, (become a writer) yes you are right that if you want to become a writer you need to use capitls. Thank for been a grat class (im trying to be nice if you think im been to chessy tell me).
See ya

Mr Woody said...

i think it's cool that you are giving each other sensible feedback on different topics and taking the opportunity to create a learning community.
well done Donkeyla - well done Sog - well done Laffy
8>)

but i reckon what you write is more important than your use of capitals.
;>)

Mr Woody said...

in fact, proof reading skills might be of beter use to you than capitals. spelling is certainly more important and some of you could do with putting in some extra effort for that ... if you disagree, please say why.
[there will be no beatings]